Next Week: Christmas Card
We've already done our family Christmas card, but I thought it would be fun to play around with the idea. I plan on coming up with a card I like but that Jen would never let me send out as our "family" card. As a warning to all, Lisa excels at this type of thing, so don't be disappointed when she blows us all away. Matt
"Grandma and Baby" - Matt
Here's another that I thought might be fun to post process.
Matt - didn't do much more than the square crop and a bit of touchup. Noticed, once post processing, that I should have framed it better. Focus was off slightly. Should have increased depth of field so more of Grandma was in focus, though I would have been pushing it with the diminishing light. Colors were decent and the exposure was just about right.
"Liz" - Matt
Just a quick portrait. Interested in seeing what you come up with.
Isaac's take on Matt's photo: Color and exposure were good to start with, the composition though could be improved. The original feels off balance with Liz's left side cropped but empty space on her right. Because the composition was already so tight, the only option left was to go tighter. By coming tight on all sides, the left ear crop doesn't seem out of place and our focus is drawn to her eyes and her smile.
Fixed By Lisa
Matt, I thought we were supposed to post BAD photos for us to fix!
I took the same close-up approach as Isaac and took off some blemishes on her face and tooth (there was a little black spot on it) and bumped up the saturation on her eyes a little more. She has such a cute shaped chin that I felt needs to be emphasized somehow and thought that removing some negative space would help.
Matt - ended up similar to what Lisa did. Once I started post processing, I noticed I seemed to have blown the highlights a bit on her cheeks and could have framed her a bit better. Wish now that I had gotten a little lower to take the picture. Focus was slightly off, and the flash would have been better a little further to one side.
So we have this Thanksgiving tradition of a race after Thanksgiving dinner just before eating pie. Keith loves being outside and I liked this shot of him looking around while the others were running laps around the yard. The sky was overcast, so the lighting is a little cool. I haven't decided quite yet what I'm going to do to post-process it, but it should be fun. I've been enjoying Adobe Lightroom 3, but still have a lot to learn.
50 mm, f/2.8, 1/160 sec., ISO 800
Isaac's take on Mike's photo: Good composition, I like the negative space in front Keith. It allows the viewer to follow his eyes as he gazes at something out of the frame (a race, presumably). To me, the original was underexposed and cold (color temperature-wise). I brightened the image and warmed it (more orange) to what I imagine it looked like to Mike when he was there.
Revision by Lisa
I loved what Isaac did to the picture and liked his idea of having the negative space in front of Keith. I wanted to try a different approach and zero in on the expression, which to me was the most eye catching part of the photo without the distractions of color and negative space. Because the picture was grainy which shows up more in b/w, I softened it in LR (probably too much, but he is cute baby!) I would have liked to have gotten more of the graininess out especially around the neck but LR2 isn't as good for that as LR3?
Matt - brightened the overall picture and also brightened his face an eyes. Added a bit more vignette. blurred the background a bit more. I was thinking similar thoughts to those by Isaac, but wanted to keep it cooler rather than warmer.

Okay, I am going to be the first to load my photo that really needs help. In fact, I am embarrassed to even post this one, but I think it will be fun to see how you guys fix this up. Here is my quick story... These friends needed a photo for their Christmas card. Their daughter is planning to add all their grandchildren to it in a collage format later. We were going to meet in the late afternoon, but the husband was delayed by work so by the time they come over, the daylight was gone and I had to improvise quickly. They were standing too close to my fuzzy blanket backdrop but I couldn't move them forward because what was behind the blanket would show; I had makeshift lighting all over the place with incandescent light which made every thing orangey; and I bounced the external flash off from the side wall to avoid shadows. This is what I got. I was disappointed. So do your magic, if you like and I will show you later how I tried to "save" this photograph to the best of my ability. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and take lots of pictures! Lisa T

Isaac's take on Lisa's photo: My first impulse to correct this mix of flash (cool light) and tungsten (warm light) is to turn it into a black and white. It's the lazy way out but what's wrong with lazy, right? It looks nice as long as your collage isn't going to be in color. The second thing I changed is the background.
The interesting thing to me is that most of the challenges with this photo were recognized by the photographer before the photo was even taken. It's not uncommon to postpone addressing a challenge until after the photo is taken- especially when you have live subjects who are looking at you like "just push the button already". Mixed light is always hard to correct in post because as you adjust for one source, the portion of the image lit by the other source gets worse and worse. You always just end up with a compromise. It's much easier to make your sources match (for example, add an orange gel to your flash so that it is similarly colored to the incandescent light) or eliminate one source (use a shutter speed fast enough to black out the tungsten lights). One external flash is plenty to light a portrait like this.
Lisa also noticed that the background was too close while she shot this, but mentioned that there were spacial constraints limiting how much she could move them away for this picture. In this case the only fix is to select the background in post and blur it or replace it entirely. I only did a quick selection for this assignment, but would certainly put in a little more effort it it were to be used for a Christmas card. If I were trying to fix this before I took the picture (and its hard to say for sure since I was not there) I think I would move the couple further away from the backdrop even if that meant there was some clutter showing in the peripheries. As long as it is not "touching" the couple in the image, it is a lot easier to clone that stuff out than make a perfect selection around our couple.

Matt - this one was a challenge, particularly because of the different light colors. I decided to desaturate on the yellow and red a bit, which gave it a bit of a sepia-type coloring. Added some pretty strong vignette (maybe too much). Darkened the background and sharpened their eyes. Cute couple; too bad the sun didn't cooperate for the photo shoot.